One Pixar artist offers an interesting set of 20 storytelling rules. They are aimed at fiction, but most can be thoughtfully considered for nonfiction as well.
For example,
#6: What is your character good at, comfortable with? Throw the polar opposite at them. Challenge them. How do they deal?
#9: When you’re stuck, make a list of what WOULDN’T happen next. Lots of times the material to get you unstuck will show up.
#13: Give your characters opinions. Passive/malleable might seem likable to you as you write, but it’s poison to the audience.
#16: What are the stakes? Give us reason to root for the character. What happens if they don’t succeed? Stack the odds against.
#19: Coincidences to get characters into trouble are great; coincidences to get them out of it are cheating.
and
#4: Once upon a time there was ___. Every day, ___. One day ___. Because of that, ___. Because of that, ___. Until finally ___.
(thanks to Nancy Duarte)
Useful rules – I will apply them to http://www.helenaandthemothership.com. It certainly needs something! I’m just starting a major edit, so this is the time! There are so many gaps and inconsistencies at the moment, but I’m on the case.